Anna Graham

Banned because your avatar is too wicked awesome!

Anna steps quietly into the room, chuckles lightly at the dancing girls, and walks along the side wall until she reaches the front. There, she settles contently into a corner ...

lol, that's awesome. 8/10

You know, you're exactly right! I think I will work on another verse. Thanks! --Anna

Mother has a new winter coat, studded with diamonds, pure and clean-- its beauty lost to eyes unseeing. “She’s worn this coat before” they say, “It makes her look so ...

I’m procrastinating my homework to write this. Math really gives me a headache. So, on to the show. I’m Anna. *waves* I’m kinda hoping this won’t turn into one of ...

I like it too! You did an excellent job! Besides, formulas like this are only here to get the juices flowing. You made it your own, which made it better. ...

Wow, this is a great piece! I couldn't write something like this if my life depended on it. You have a great rhythm going, and the rhyming doesn't sound forced. ...

This is a great idea! I think you pulled it off well! There's one main thing that could make it better though, which Eimear already mentioned a bit. You tell ...

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I don't know what it is, but I really like this poem! It's definitely original, which gives it a kind of potency and makes the reader curious. It's a common ...

I agree! This piece makes me want to jump up and smack that owner, then go help the animals. You portrayed the idea well. There are a few small things ...

Thank you! This poem has been bugging me for a while, but I haven't been able to decide why. Thanks for your comments, they'll help loads! --Anna

The words on my tongue fester behind a closed portal. I swallow them, afraid what they will reveal to the gazes that burn into my back. As I walk, smoking ...

I just wanted to say: Wow! I love it! I love the imagery, the rhythm, the rhyme, and your wide range of words. You keep us interested without rushing, and ...